Friday, October 18, 2019

Moment In Time



My Reflection

I have been learning to write a moment in time.
I found this easy because I am good at describing where I am and what I hear, see, feel, and wonder.
Something I could do to improve my writing is to use longer sentences and more figurative language including hyperboles, similes, and onomatopoeia.
My next step is to use an alliteration, and use more interesting words too.

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