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Friday, October 23, 2020
The Quest For The Sword of Gryffindor Part 2
Reflection
This is a continued story of the story I wrote last year, The Quest For The Sword of Gryffindor Part 1.
What I found easy about writing part 2 was that I already had an idea so I didn't need much thinking.
What I found hard was using better words for boring words. I actually wrote this story a few months ago but I made some changes and what I mean by the boring word thing is for example I used the word 'said' but I changed it to 'exclaimed' which sounds much more exciting and overall just better.
Next time I will work on making some parts of the story easier to understand for readers.
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