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The Quest For The Sword of Gryffindor Part 2

Reflection

This is a continued story of the story I wrote last year, The Quest For The Sword of Gryffindor Part 1.

What I found easy about writing part 2 was that I already had an idea so I didn't need much thinking. 

What I found hard was using better words for boring words. I actually wrote this story a few months ago but I made some changes and what I mean by the boring word thing is for example I used the word 'said' but I changed it to 'exclaimed' which sounds much more exciting and overall just better.

Next time I will work on making some parts of the story easier to understand for readers.

My Contribution During Covid 19

Why Should You Consider an Electric Bike as Your Transportation

I have been learning about persuasive writing.

What I found tricky was about choosing a interesting and easy-to-write topic.

What I found easy was to find interesting words ad text

Next time i will work on finding a better topic and using more expression when saying my speech.

Human Anatomy

We have been learning about the human anatomy.

The part I found difficult was how some parts were too specific so it was hard to find information and diagrams.

What I found easy was working in a team so I could get help from classmates.

Next time I need to work on using simpler words to make the slide easier to understand.

Welcome Post

I.a.l.t write and post to my blog.

Success Criteria:

I know I will be successful when I:

- make my post 4-6 sentences

- include my new room number and teacher

- include my interests

- include a goal for the year or something I am am looking forward to

- edit my work so there are no spelling mistakes and ensure that it makes sense

Welcome to my year 6 learning blog. This year I am in Room 24 and my teacher is Mrs Naidoo. I enjoy writing stories and narratives. This year I am looking forward too swimming and art. I hope you will enjoy my blog and leave lots of feedback