91 Banana road
Fruit valley
0000
13/3/18
Dear mum and dad,
I can hear loud music banging like fireworks from the radio. I see lots of wooden shelves
With colourful items on them. I see hundreds of different people chatting with
their friends. The walls are as smooth as polished wood,
and my feet can feel the very hard floor. The ceiling is as high as a skyscraper
and I taste delicious food when I walk out of the cafe.
I can smell a very cold and fresh smell in all of the rooms. The
Place has lots of interesting signs.
WHERE AM I?
From,
Timothy
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Reflection: We have been learning to describe a setting using our senses.
I enjoyed using similes and using interesting words. It was tricky to describe the things I see
because it is hard to think of words that match and makes sense. It was easy to find words that are
related to the sound because I am good at using words like "zoomed!" or "bang!" which are
like words with sounds. Next time I should use more interesting words that describe smell.